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O'Mal'caor has been searching for the dreaded planet of the waking Necrons for more than two Tau'cyr. Finally after a long and dangerous journey through warp storms has he found that planet. He shuddered remembering the creatures from his dreams, creatures dressed in skin from the dead ones. This time he would make his stay permanent. He would destroy all traces of the Necrons and colonize the entire planet. For the Greater Good! He picked his best men and vehicles, but left some of his Lissera with the Manta ray, for he did not know what to expect.
O'Mal'caor dressed himself in his most unique and deadly battlesuit, the Yanoi Mal'caor the on with the shards of O'Shovah's blades! He would give back their property, into their black, metal hearts! He set of soon after all his Lissera were finished preparing for the battle. Their orca dropship hovered towards the great obelisk were O'Mal'caor found the Dawn Blade, he would start destroying with that building. They landed about 500 tor'lek from the building. They checked their ammo cartridges and then set of. What O'Mal'caor expected was no-one in front of the obelisk, but he was wrong. Their were four teams of Necron warriors, one team of the Flayed Ones, two Necron destroyers, one Necron lord, five teams of the Immortals and the dreaded C'tan Nightbringer!
We split into two teams, team one (me as commander) went right and team two went left. At the first site of the C'tan, my army almost perished. I order my army to attack. It was a bloody battle. I fired my Airbursting Fragmentation Launcher at the C'tan as if I was shooting at the devil. My plasma rifle scorched the Flayed Ones and my shards gleamed as if alive. Whenever I sliced a Necron no blood or bodily fluids went on it. Then all hell broke loose, the C'tan jumped towards me. I moved just in time to stop his sword from damaging Yanoi Mal'caor. We went into close combat. I was using my shield generator as a shield from him, but he just had to take all the blows I gave him. I cut of his arm when he lost control when he slipped on corpse. Then he disappeared. I thought I saw him floating away but I didn't have time to look. I needed to get back to the battle. My bodyguards were all dead, half my Lissera were injured. Then with a loud zing the ground cracked in half and out springed a new force of Necrons. I called for retreat. We would never get out alive. We rushed towards our dropships and there we flew to our manta ray, we fired a few seeker missiles just to warn the Necrons not to follow. This was my first defeat of many to come. But I need to gather more troops to launch another assault on the Necrons. For now I will need to wait.
And I will cross paths with my old commander, I will make him work for the greater good. I will.
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| Comment made by destroy worm on 11:06:13, 27 October 2007 |
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| alrite bad vocab |
| Comment made by battlesuitguy on 12:40:24, 31 August 2007 |
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| errr...good luck with future stories, cos i h8 to say it, this one is awful...bad vocabulary, grammar and spelling, and you kept switching between 1st and 3rd person...i give it a 3...oh and dont rate your own work its sad |
| Comment made by MistahG on 22:36:45, 28 January 2007 |
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| Chickenfish, are you rating your own text,like the last one you made? You can't top rate your own text because "It's good", because it ain't that good. Hundreds of spelling errors and your storytelling is actually quite bad. Good luck next time. |
| Comment made by Chicken fish on 08:22:03, 28 January 2007 |
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| I made this so its good. But I need to work on other ones! |
